|Reviews for Remember Me|
| Small Wings Flying 4/2/12 . chapter 1
The beginning was a little lacking (you seem to be mincing words and commas in that paragraph, but the ending was beautiful. Even more so when we don't know the reason behind the events. I guess she might be sick and doesn't want him to suffer anymore, or she's going off to chase a dream she's spend her whole life striving towards or something like that...but that guy's pain is kind of heartwrenching towards the end...which is probably the point.
It does a nice job capturing a snippet of emotion's fallacy.