Do you research this stuff? Because to me this and most of your other stories just seem really accurate, and when I read them I always wonder if you have researched before writing. Anyway, this o e seems well researched and pretty accurate. I like this, very emotional.

This would be better if you fleshed it out more, I think but good job still and I love your concept.

Ever heard the song "Survivor's Guilt" by Rise Against? If you haven't, look it up on youtube. Rise Against has such deep songs, I love it.

-REB

I love this! I'd like to hear more.