|Reviews for Cupid Collections|
| Guest 9/9/12 . chapter 18
| Fate Rose 9/8/12 . chapter 18
Hi there! So, I was going to do a bunch of productive things, like homework and cleaning, and then R&R your chapter. But then I turned on the TV. And Adventure Time was on. So I was just like, ‘Lol nope. Not doing homework.’ I did try though. I read a page from my nonprofit book, but yeah… So anyways, since I figured I’m not doing many productive things, I can at least R&R while this crazy cartoon is on commercial.
Poor Nate. Having a crappy day only to later have someone break into his house. :c That sucks.
I always forget that Sean used to be married. How sad.
We don’t do spicy either! :D Although, I totally probably read into that too much, because to me it definitely seemed like she was not talking about the food which is kinda awkward, but yeah…
I’ve never made sauce from scratch.
Ahahahaha. Everyone’s like, ‘You need to date!’ It’s funny. (And annoying from Nate’s perspective, I’m sure.)
‘I wasn’t interested in having a girlfriend’. XD If I didn’t know better, I’d just be like, ‘So he’s interested in having a boyfriend, then?’ That would’ve been a very different story, now would it?
Liam? Isn’t there a Liam in One Direction? XD
He was confident in his marriage? How sad…
Why? Why wouldn’t she want leftovers? That’s one less meal to cook! (I hate eating leftovers, but I hate cooking just a little more.)
Surprises when you walk through the door? I SPY FORESHADOWING. XD
He was seriously not having a good day.
Well that was interesting. Can’ really say I blame Nate for not being very happy with a random girl in his apartment. I definitely would’ve grabbed my bat if I were in his place.
I’d love to see an HBA chapter soon! :D
Alright, well, have a fantastic weekend and update something sometime soonish please!
| surrendertomusic 9/8/12 . chapter 18
Omg this brings back memories :') it was really interesting to read all this from Nate's point of view! It's all very creative :D
| geeky-asian-ninja 9/8/12 . chapter 18
:) Keep posting!
| PorkythePig 9/1/12 . chapter 17
YOU MAKE MY DAY! I look forward to this. Great job
| Guest 9/1/12 . chapter 17
| surrendertomusic 8/29/12 . chapter 17
Oh my goshhh, I totally just got a flashback of the first time I read Cupid's Granddaughter when I read that last bit. Oh the memories :') even though it probably wasn't even that long ago.. Hahaha. Anyways, I loved Pysche and Cupid in this chapter! I never thought about what Pysche felt about the whole situation.. Puts it in a whole different light :)
| geeky-asian-ninja 8/28/12 . chapter 17
I can understand where Psyche is coming from. But Eros is lovely :)
| Fate Rose 8/28/12 . chapter 17
Hi there! So I’ll be in and out of this review because I’m talking with one of my WOAL family members that I haven’t heard from in like forever.
…how old is Pyro? I always forget that he’s not immortal like Nate and Peyton. OHMYGOD, YOU’RE NOT GOING TO DO THE DOG DYING CHAPTER, ARE YOU? No! Too sad. D: TOO SAD.
Dogs are the best. But they don’t live long enough. :c
I always forget that Sean used to be married…
…I miss my big dogs. And Taco, but mostly my big dogs. I want a dog when I can have one…
I’m a little slow. When the POV switched, I totally thought it was Peyton’s POV now and I was just like… ‘What?’ Then I went to reread it and saw the little, ‘Eros’s POV’, note and I was like, ‘Oh, that makes sense.’
Different note: My conversation with my WOAL family member just ended, so now I have one less distraction. Whoo!
Poor Psyche. She’s so nice and sweet and Peyton kind of just bailed on her and her daughter sucks and poor Psyche. I love her.
…I managed to read three paragraphs thinking that this was in 3rd person POV. Even though I saw the word ‘I’. I think I’m tired… Or maybe I’m just dumb. Honestly, it could be either one.
‘Make it up as I go along’! That sounds like a me plan! :D
WHY IS THIS CHAPTER SO SAD; DAMN YOU?!
Okay, you’re forgiven because Eros is so adorable. Ohmygod that ‘perfect bride and mother of my child’ line was like the cutest thing ever.
I love Eros and Psyche. I think they might be the most adorable Cupid couple.
Awkward grandparents making out mental image. Which is wrong, because I know they’re young, but that was the mental image I go.
Ahahahaha! I remember this!
Was not expecting Peyton’s POV. Is that word for word from CGD? (I assume so. No reason to rewrite it, right?)
o.e My question was like, directly answered in your A/N. Weird.
Eros and Psyche are adorable! :D
I live with you so I know when all the chapters are coming out! I feel special and informed. Whoo!
I did enjoy this chapter! I’m curious as to where you’ll go next. Update soon-ish. :D
(And now I’m going to shout, ‘Reviewed!)
P.S. This review is 400 words.
| Heehee 8/28/12 . chapter 17
How about a chapter about Nate's POV when Peyton barges into his apartment for the first time? First impressions, etc?
| Fate Rose 8/13/12 . chapter 16
I’m going to side with Hermes in this argument. As someone who sees most of her family once a year, if that, Peyton is lucky to spend all that time with hers.
Alcohol is bad! No, Peyton! No!
You have two sentences where you randomly switch to 3rd person POV. “I glanced over at the bar wearily. Alcohol had never made her life any better before. She doubted it would be much help now.”
Flashback! And the chapter title makes sense now!
“I still have one of those?” :C
I feel like the first was beer, the second was a martini or something, and the third was whiskey or tequila.
Her mother hates smokers… Can you say motive for Peyton to smoke?
Oooh, Brooke! :D
Ahahahaha. Never touch them again. Right.
It’s 3pm on Monday now and I’m not that tired, so this review is not that rambly. Sorry if it's not my usual awesome.
I’d say, ‘see you in two weeks’, but I’m going to literally see you in one! :D So…see your next chapter in two weeks! Adios! Looking forward to move-in. C:
| chewychester 8/13/12 . chapter 16
Sad flashback, but I think many people can relate to big birthdays being disappointments.
| I.Am.A.Country.Girl 8/10/12 . chapter 15
So you're gonna think I'm crazy but for the past three days I've done practically nothing except for reading you Cupid stories :D Everything for three days it's 3:33 am and I'm so tired but I just had to finish and I have to get up in four and a half hours and tomorrow is gonna be exhausting but it was so worth it I don't want these characters to go away! Love all four of your stories and can't wait for more :D
PS I'm in Arizona visiting my dad :D I was looking at your profile and saw Arizona and I was like hey I'm there :D
Anyway enough with my rambling. Love it can't wait :D
| Fate Rose 8/7/12 . chapter 15
So, yesterday, I was not in a fabulous mood so I didn’t want to read your chapter and give you a crappy review. I figured it would be better to wait so that I could give you an awesome (hopefully, anyways) review. So here I am! :D
Ahahaha. Her current opinion of smoking immensely amuses me.
Oh! Oh! Is this when she meets Brooke by breaking them up?
It IS when she meets Brooke by breaking them up! :D (Or I guess D: in Brooke’s mind.)
Women really are not intelligent. But neither are men so ‘whateve’s’, as you would say. XD
Happy CC Sunday! Even if it’s now Tuesday. You’re sorry your chapter was late. I’m sorry my review is late.
I was hoping you’d show us how Brooke and Peyton ended up living together. Maybe you’ll include that in the next chapter? C:?
It was fun to read, too! I wish I’d done it sooner! (Seriously, I’m sorry about this.) This probably would have improved my night!
Anyways, watching, er…reading about, I guess, Peyton at the party was kind of funny. She’s not fond of alcohol, is she? I believe I recall her being rather unhappy when Nate went out and got drunk.
Places that have/serve alcohol tend to be a meeting place for these characters. XD Hedone went to the speakeasy, CGD ‘starts in a bar’, and apparently Peyton met Brooke at a drunken college party. Fascinating!
Alright, well, I know this review is short, but I really don’t have much to say. It was an awesome chapter and I totally loved it, but…well, that’s all there is to say, I guess. This chapter didn’t spawn half a million questions, relevant or otherwise. (Which is a good thing.)
I miss you! Can’t wait to see you. :D Soon!
And, y’know, update and stuff!
| Lupes 8/5/12 . chapter 15
Sam! Hi! I'm reviewing on time! :D A college party is where it all starts, dun dun dun! Poor Brooke! She hasn't had a good love life and then that happened.. It's for the best though but it still sucks :/ I'm surprised Peyton wasn't drinking or smoking at the party.. Poor Brooke, atleast she met Sean later on in life! She didn't forget! Ahh! Peyton's and Brooke's friendship began so lovely haha I'm excited to see how their friendship grew and how Brooke actually remembered Peyton and how they met again! Good chapter as always Sam! I MISS YOU! Thank you for letting me stay at your house! I was so happy we got to hang out again! :D I missed you! I can't wait to see you again a few weeks! :D Adios! Until the next chapter! :D