This shift in point of viedw is extremelyu confusing (especially since the characters' names begin with the same letter) and unnecessary. You've been doing a just-fine job of telling the story without it.

awww, so mushy gushy sweet! : )

Awesome Story! and ur right! I did like Alex at the end! :P I'l be sure to add it to my favourites if I open an account!

I didn't want to review till i finished the entire story, but i really like it so far! I hope it stays this awesome! frankly, never was a fan of same-sex pairings, but this story totally got me hooked! :P

Awww, this was cute. Although I will admit, I did get quite confused at times, between the past and present, and which boy was narrating. I think that was partially the alternating first person, and paritally the two "J" names. But it was super cute, and I did like it.

When he started saying all those names I laughed especially when he said other... You have a knack for writing, are really good knack. Your grammar is perfect and your style is good.

I liked the epilogue. It was cute. And fluffy. I think it ended nicely.

Hm... what else... I don't really have anything else to say, other than the suggestion that (in future stories) try to get more detailed/in depth with the plot and the characters. Doing that will make it more enjoyable to read.

Oh, yes. I don't think this story needs to be rated M. (I'm not really sure how much of a difference it will really make, but I'm just saying...)

Well, I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

Hmmm... them finally ending their idiocy and getting a happily-ever-after is wahat I had in mind for a happy ending. However... I would have liked to see more with the video; I feel like that was wrapped up far too simply. And also I feel like (after all the time they spent dancing around the issue) they admitted it a bit to easily.

I guess what I'm trying to say is that this chapter was a bit too smooth to be believable.

I did like that it was Alex that told Jessie to tell Jake the truth; it shows that Jessie did care about Alex, even if it wasn't as much as he was claiming/in the way Alex would have liked.

Looking forward to the epilogue,

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

*beats head against wall in frustration*

Honestly, they SUCK at communication. I mean, come on, Jake gave him the PERFECT opportunity to start a conversation that would sort everything out and what does Jessie do? Oh, sorry I have to go!

I'm looking forward (probably not the best word choice, but I don't know how else to say it) to what Derek does with the video. And I'm glad (sort of) that you brought him back, since the way he left last time was too clean.

Other than that... poor Jessie. So confused. So blind. Well... I suppose there's no cure for stupidity... if there were, all their problems would be solved.

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

OH MY GOD! Yes, I love this! I did almost the same thing with a story of mine and it was fun to write, I can only imagine how fun it'll be to read with characters I love. But yes, it was bound to happen. Ugh, it's just soooo much! Love this though. Continue!

Love,

Astir

Ummm... bright side, it was Jake and not Peter?

I really liked this chapter. It amused me, although I would have liked to see a little bit more responsiveness from Jake (whether complaints or other random comments) before Jessie takes his shirt off again.

Hm. Well, I don't know what else to say other than I liked it. People do the stupidest things when they're drunk... Oh well.

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

Their stupidity is so damn frustrating... I have yet to decide which of them is more stupid. If stupidity was an Olympic event, one of them would get silver and the other would get gold.

Um... Yeah. That's all. I'm just frustrated. Nothing much else to say about these two chapters.

Good job, looking forward to more. :)

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

*Rolls on floor* OMG WAOGHWAGNOAEGLKJSNL I love this, I just found int randomly and it was amazing O.O I love this story like crazy :3 update soon. Jessie and Jake are stupid in a cute and adorable way.

*beats head against brick wall*

And here I was thinking Jake was a halfway decent person. Jessie goes and breaks up with Alex on Jake's behalf, and all Jake has to say is 'oh yeah, Alex is just pretending.'

*groans*

I'm just so pissed off at them right now, I can't really think of anything else to say.

Stupid, stupid, stupid...

*takes a deep breath*

Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always. :)

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

I'm getting way too emotionally involved in this story... Even though I knew it was still... I don't know. Shocked isn't the right word, but I can't come up with anything else either.

And now I'm about dying of curiosity to know what Jessie's thinking.

The only other thing I have to say at the moment is that they're both idiots...

And "P.S." stands for "post script," so it would be "P.P.S." (post post script). ;)

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi