This was really cute :) Some minor grammatical errors and a bit of awkward wording, but I liked the mood, playful and quirky.

I really enjoyed this story! Some lovely description ('social ability was just about as good as a rock' made me chuckle) but it still moved at a really nice pace. The club definitely sounds more fun the first party. I really liked the way it ended.

And I was being a bit slow and finished the whole thing before I though 'OH, that's why she was called Alyss' haha.

Good job :)