I'm glad you updated. I still really enjoy reading Ezlor's thoughts and his conversations with his parents and Mitchell. I also like it a lot that Mitchell respects Ezlor's wishes and that Ezlor and Mitchell are so honest when they talk to each other. It seems like they really care for each other and it's very heartwarming.

..."and then everything went to help." Atleast I'm expecting something along those lines... tnx for finally updating, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Awesome story, and I've said it before I think, but I love how you construct the characters, and how you stay away from going into total cliche mode, actually taking time to build a story and relationship. Keep up the awesomesauce! xD

Cheers.

I don't if this story will be continued, but I loved reading it until now.
There were a few typos, but the chapters are really long and
I liked the story very much, because you gave your characters depth and there were a lot of funny scenes. I think the part with Jonah was a bit too rushed, in comparison to the rest of the plot.
I especially liked the part when Ezlor felt alone and like his friends and parents didn't understand him, because it was realistic and the conversations with his parents or Tommy and Nancy. Those showed their different personalities and their love for Ezlor. And Mitchell showed that people can be very different from what we think they are like when we don't know them well.
What makes the story really special, like a smart reviewer before me said, is that it's easy to relate to the characters. My behaviour and personality isn't very similar to Ezlor's, but there are feelings that everyone has and I could identify with that. I could also find some people I know or myself in some things a character did or said.
So thank you for publishing this. I enjoyed reading it. :)

Omg hurrrry I've been waiting for sooo long:c

aawwwwwww this story is so good and funny! this is the first story i have read on ficpress but im sure going to read more! Cant wait tilll you update!

I was going to write a really long review, but i think two words, awesome story, would be enough to do it justice.

I really like the characters you've built, with Ez as a very interesting and quite recognizable protagonist (I'm nothing like him, but i can definitely relate too/identify with a lot of this story), and a great crew of side characters.

The shifts of focus in the story were quite well done too. (for example, i was shipping Tommy and Ez all the way up until Mitchel's transformation from asshole to nice guy with issues)

finally, the sole real criticism i have is that i do fairly regularly spot some verb related grammatical errors here 'n there, which are a bit annoying but nothing bad enough to stop the story from being great.

Gratz on writing this and i'm really looking forward to how the story continues!

OMFG!This is one of the best books I've ever read. Can't wait for the rest of this o come out. This is incredible and its funny :)

Oh ma god... ME LOVES IT! Who knew Ez had such a cheeky side! :D Love love love and more love.. when can we expect another update? :D

Ooh! This chapter was good! I like the getting jealous thing! I can't wait for more, this is so good! :DD

JuneBug

OMG I LOVE IT! (SORRY FOR THE CAPS, THE KEY IS STUCK) UPDATE SOON :)

too lazy to sign in lol

OMG FINALLY!

OMG I love the smex! It's great, and surprisingly hot *0*
I was super happy when you updated, please hurry up and post more!
Love ProbablyyourBiggestFan
JuneBug

UGH WHENNNN :(

Hey, I'm JuneBug but logged on
Just posting this so I can add your story to my alerts.