Omg, that was great, very depresing and sad, I almost cryed. No complaints.

This is a very powerful dark poem, good job

Whoa! This is a really good poem!

Keep it up;)

story of my life. i love thios poem. you really have a way with words.

You certainly covered the subject thoroughly and made us feel the sensation of swallowing the last biter drop of hate. That's why I decided to change my drinking habits.

See this is why i love every poet. They always have that one poem that really gets to you. I'll definitely be checking out your other works :) Keep writing!

Your work is vary powerful, and flows so nicely. I loved it.

This is good.

This was good. You described the concept flawlessly and almost effortlessly. Truthfully and well written. Great job! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

Very dark and truthful. I think everyone feels like this sometimes; like you hate yourself and everything around you because it doesn't hurt as much that way. Great job. :)

awesome but very full on. *plays sinister music*

Very dark and lovely. I hope you don't feel like this too often!