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| Reviews for Fallen |
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   MentalBrink 4/15/12 . chapter 2This has a fluid start and fair character development, and although it's shortness hinders it a bit I like it :) |
| Punslinger 4/12/12 . chapter 2 Nice chapter. The characters are shaping up well. (A short review for a short chapter.) |
| Punslinger 4/5/12 . chapter 1 This is a very good introductory chapter. You've set up the characters and plot clearly enough to make readers want to learn what will happen next. I wonder what part Shaya's fascination with magik will play in the story? |
