|Reviews for Fallen|
| MentalBrink 4/15/12 . chapter 2
This has a fluid start and fair character development, and although it's shortness hinders it a bit I like it :)
| Punslinger 4/12/12 . chapter 2
Nice chapter. The characters are shaping up well.
(A short review for a short chapter.)
| Punslinger 4/5/12 . chapter 1
This is a very good introductory chapter. You've set up the characters and plot clearly enough to make readers want to learn what will happen next. I wonder what part Shaya's fascination with magik will play in the story?