Good stories, Interesting premise and very good short story structure, enough detail to keep the tale moving and not dragging the story... Thank you for sharing your tlent

Crap, oh not the story I think its fine, but I just had a similar for a story a western fantasy, with elves,dwarves,other non human but not alien races . I'm dissapointed that I got beaten to it, but I think this is interesting and a good story

This is a very unique idea :) Watch out for spelling and word choice but the characters were great. There was some awkward sentence phrasing but that obviously came from being so into writing the story itself. Your approach to the whole combination of western/fantasy is really compelling and I liked reading it quite a bit!