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JesusWalkedOnWater 7/7/12 . chapter 5Wow. What's up with Lime's dream? WHy did he say 'like you used to'? WHY? So many questions! Only more chappies will tell! Thanks for posting this chapter! Update REALLY, REALLY, REALLY SOON. PLEASE! I love this story! Check out my story? Please? I'm trying to update ASAP but I coudn't come up with anything so far. Enyways, love your story! |
JesusWalkedOnWater 7/7/12 . chapter 4that was the best drama bomb EVER! but ten-year-old Sal has quite a dirty mouth for her age. :) Oh, well. |
JesusWalkedOnWater 7/7/12 . chapter 3This one made me crack a smile because everyone has the kind of retarded thoughts. :) I LOVED this chapter! |
JesusWalkedOnWater 7/7/12 . chapter 2Yaaaaaaaaaaay! Please continue! |
JesusWalkedOnWater 7/7/12 . chapter 1Wow. THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND IT'S ONLY THE 1ST CHAPTER! OMGOSH! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON! |
ZombieBunnyLaugh 4/26/12 . chapter 5You've reached your goal of 15 reviews! ( applause ) So here is your reward. The secret is... ...that you've all been wooed... ...by a remarably talented... ...( Drumroll then silence )... ... Da-Da-Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... ... 13 year old! ( you're now sporting epic faces except for 2 of you ) -ZBL |
bookppl93 4/23/12 . chapter 5Luv it |
Mizulynn105 4/22/12 . chapter 5OMG! THEY'RE CHILDHOOD FRIENDS/LOVERS! :DD IM SO EXCITED! UPDATE REALLY SOON BECAUSE I CAN'T WAIT! :DD Why did Lime sleep on him when he was in obvious pain? |
vivi493 4/22/12 . chapter 5I love this story! It's going on my favs list! I can't wit for updates! |
Half-Blood 4/22/12 . chapter 5prrrrfect. That was a wonderful chapter. |
Half-Blood 4/16/12 . chapter 2I love this story, Lime is awesome. I want to tell every one reasding this, I posted a story too, go check it out. It is also awesome. |
Mizulynn105 4/14/12 . chapter 4I really liked how Lime created the Ginger Experiment so she could be around Pothe without being questioned. XD Update soon! |
Half-Blood 4/14/12 . chapter 4chapter 4 was a great add in. It will help pull the story together. Don't get me wrong it was great, but go back to Lime for a few Chapters. I think it would be cool to see Kip blow his top or Lime completly reject him. |
Half-Blood 4/14/12 . chapter 3ok, here's the deal. chapters one and two where wonderful. They totaly got my attinsiion. My mind is wondering why this kidnapper kidnapped Lime, does he even know her? Lime is so weird and awesome at the same time. I can't believe she would slap her kidnapper, and I can't believe he's almost being bossed around by her! chapter 3 was not as good, don't let Annoyer rush you. If she does I will kill her! I realy want to know Kip's name. by the way, that secret you mentioned, make that two people it won't surprise. |
bookppl93 4/14/12 . chapter 4Sam is a monster. No we didn't forget you. * Waits for next chaper. T_T |