love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!

P.S MAKE THAT SECOND CHAPTER NOW!

Ooooooh This was really good! Definitely write another chapter.

Go ahead and write another chapter please! Specifically I'd like to know why Liz is there in the first place. This story has grabbed my interest. Please continue it!

This is really good, I'd love to read more of it! I'd love to know what Liz did!