Reviews for Sumbit an OC Survivorfor the story Aftershock
someoneimportant31 5/23/12 . chapter 1
one more thing. i felt the need to add a good quote for mine so... "dislike, unsubscribe" something like that. feel free to pm me if you need to know more about my oc,(someoneimportant31)

good luck and happy writing
The Nerdy Mirror Maze Queen 5/5/12 . chapter 1
I decided I wanted to change Sid's profile so if you use her please use this one

Full name: Sydney Smith

Nickname: Sid

Age: 14

Weapon:she's a strong girl(she can lift 365 pounds over her head), brass knuckles

Family: she has a grizzly bear like dad, no mom & a brother in collage

Home town: Dallas TX

Birthday: March 31

Gender: f

Height: 5'8

Weight: 120

Eye color/shape: brown, round

Hair: curly dark brown stops at mid back

scars: she has 2. 1 on her knee from being scracthed by a cat and the other on her arm from being attacked by an emo weilding a pencil

Build: stick figure

Formal Clothe: same pants & shoes black jacket & shirt

Regular Clothes:blue flare jeans, dark purple short sleaved shirt, black & white cardigain combatt boots

Likes: rodeos,roller durby, wrestling, barns, drag queens, exploshions

Dislikes: brushing her hair, puppets, robots

Personality: she is usally level headed but she can have a firey temper. She can be discribed as a wild fire and she will be stuborn when she wants to. She also trys occasionally to be funny but it normally comes off as weird.

Star Sign: aries

Quote:as dark as it sounds the whole system sucks! It takes a real man to do drag. Insert Words Here(yes she says this when she trys to be funny) In order to have safe snacks always remember the condument(she also quotes a bunch of random stuff)

Quick Backstory: her life was normal but she found it dull she she started wrestling and roller durby and drawing then came Mr ol' earthquake

Would you like your character to be met along the way to Ft. Omaha, or to be met in Ft. Omaha? met along the way please

Is the oc nice or rude to characters?: Y/N/Depends If so which ones and why: nice(though tough) but alittle rude to Nicolette
fanfic writer 4/28/12 . chapter 1
he also never curses. doesn't mind it from other people, but you'll never hear it from him
fanfic writer 4/28/12 . chapter 1
(no fictionpress account so contact me )

or at (someoneimportant)

Full name: Alex Davis

Nickname: Alex

Age:16

Skin color: chocolate brown, bit of a red tint around the cheeks in the summer

Weapon: Y/N If so what: Primary: two machetes, kept VERY sharp, one in each hand. Think the book of eli (movie, google it)

Secondary: one of dads m-14’s (dad’s in a rifle club, it’s the civillian semi auto version)

Family: momdad, divorced usually lives with mom

Home town: pennsylvania

Birthday: 10/31/2043

Gender: Male

Height: 6”2

Weight: 201

Eye color/shape: brown

Hair color/length/streaks: Black, short

: Stocky. broad with a strong-looking physique. compact, sturdy, and relatively thick in build, broad-shouldered (used to play football, and works for a moving company in the summers for some extra cash)

Formal Clothes: some kind of polo shirt(usually green, yellow, or blue) and nice pants (black, beige or tan, whichever goes better with the shirt

Regular Clothes:depends on the weather. If its warm, long but breathable pants(keeps bugs offplants have thorns), sneakers and short sleeves. Backpack with the essentials on the back. In the winter, heavy white jacket with furry hood, ski mask(gotta keep the nose warm), gloves, heavy pants, and combat boots.

Likes: anything with cheese in it, bass guitar, good company, good music(anything catchy), memes, pokemon, video games in general, photography, books (finishes most books in about half a day, short ones within the hour), anime, manga, cheering people up,helping people when they need it, the bible (christian, but doesn’t really talk about it unless it comes up in conversation)

Dislikes: when people ignore him because he’s quiet, unnecessary killing (if its to save your life, go on ahead) , when people try to get him to do everything because he’s strong, music with creepy lyrics

Personality:extremely patient, super loyal, kind to all unless they’re jerks,creative, an inventor, on the quieter side(note: not shy, just quiet. Has no problem talking to people or jumping into a conversation, its just that he kinda sucks at starting conversations)knows many internet memes, quite funny once you get to know him(people always say “why don’t you talk more?” he always says either “didn’t feel like it” or “just didn’t have anything to say”), optimistic, smart, realistic, dependable, strange ability to understand people even when they make no sense, good at reading people, not sexist,

Star Sign: scorpio

Motto/Quote: (any meme that’s appropriate),

Quick Backstory (what happened in your past?): When he was 15, his family moved to california. Since he had a few years notice, and he didn’t like the thought of earthquakes at all, he bought up a bunch of survival gear off of army surplus sites, just in case. Mom was on a buisness trip and he was living with dad at the time. When the earthquake hit dad was on the way to work(survived), by some miracle the house survived, but with the city being in chaos and that looters might show up, he figured the best thing to do was to get to ft omaha (he and dad agreed to meet up there. They called each other by emergency satellite phone). He packed up his “bug out bag”, his home made sword, one of his dad’s rifles(and ammo) and left. He taught himself to shoot on the way. (still photographer hands, patience, and a decent ability with math makes a great sniper)

Would you like your character to be met along the way to Ft. Omaha, or to be met in Ft. Omaha?

Along the way

Is the oc nice or rude to characters?: Y/N/Depends If so which ones and why:

Nice to all, just that kind of guy,

Other: walks and moves really quietly, so if you’re not careful, you’ll lose track of him. Also owns a ghillie suit.
mountainman91 4/21/12 . chapter 1
Full name: Jacob Rylan Osborne

Nickname: Rylan

Age: 19

Weapon: Y/N If so what (nothing sci-fi unrealistic doesn't exist in real life or would be impossible to get a hold of): Primary: A shotgun with a folding, lightweight stock, can be fired either with one hand or like a conventional shotgun. Secondary: Carries a recurve hunting bow that dissassembles into three pieces into his pack and a quiverful of arrows. Has a short sword with the name of his great grandfather engraved on the blade, it's been in the family for generations, and he knows how to use it. Looks like a Swiss Sharpshooter's sword. Look it up.

Family: His parents were killed by looters on the way home. Things East of California have been falling apart for a long while. His sister (Anna, 18) married a young man who was a friend of the family in order to keep from starving to death, and yes, she did like him. Rylan was left to fend for himself, which he's OK with. Has been hiring out as a scout or a mercenary for a while.

Home town: Larkspur, Colorado. Think podunk truckstop/ranch/biker town right up next to pristine wilderness.

Birthday: December 6

Gender: Male

Height: 6'

Weight: 185

Eye color/shape: Brown eyes, rather small. Regular length lashes

Hair color/length/streaks: Brown hair with some blond highlights that the sun brings out. He likes to keep it short but most of the time it's just long enough to be messy, which annoys him.

Scars, tattoos or birthmarks:

Build: Rylan is a runner, but his body type is an all around endurance build. He has broad shoulders, a deep chest, a well toned core, strong legs and arms that are wiry but strong. Not buff, but definitely tough as leather and extremely capable.

Formal Clothes: Wears a western style wool blazer, black boots, black western shirt, black jeans, a turquoise Bolo tie, and a Stetson

Regular Clothes: favors camouflage Underarmor t shirts or mockneck with camouflage cargo pants, carries ammunition in an olive drab tactical chest rig. He likes things simple, squared away and out of the way.

Likes: Country music, road trips, quiet evenings doing archery, working with his hands, smart people who mind their own business, learning new things, women who can take care of themselves, old folks who have lots of life experience, running.

Dislikes: Arrogant people, especially arrogant bossy people, picky people, heavy metal, screamo, tight places with no room to move, generally is a little condescending towards city people.

Personality: Rylan is quiet and very religious (Christian). He tries to be like a pool of still water (aka seeking tranquility), and tries to cultivate peace in his relationships with people, even if he doesn't like them. He doesn't get angry easily or quickly, but when he does, crud goes down. He is very, very loyal and extremely protective. He is hard on himself, especially when he screws up, and has little patience for his own 'sins'.

Star Sign: Saggitarius

Motto/Quote: 'I'll scratch your back if...ok don't scratch mine. I've got too many sharp pointy things hanging out over there."

Quick Backstory (what happened in your past?): See family. He was very close with all of them, and they had an ordinary, normal life. His sister was going to school, he was attending community college, going to archery tournaments, they would hike and picnic as a family on the weekends, and then everything went downhill very quickly.

Would you like your character to be met along the way to Ft. Omaha, or to be met in Ft. Omaha? On the way. He could even be tarrying near the big CA, which is where y'all are. He gets around pretty quickly on his own two feet.

Is the oc nice or rude to characters?: Y/N/Depends If so which ones and why: He will have to work hard to be nice to everyone, but he will try. Even if they aren't to him.
The Nerdy Mirror Maze Queen 4/21/12 . chapter 1
Full name: Sydney Trapp

Nickname: Sid

Age: 14

Weapon: either bow & arrow or hand gun

Family: she has a grizzly bear like dad and no mom & a brother in collage

Home town: Dallas TX

Birthday: April 13

Gender: f

Height: 5'6

Weight: 119

Eye color/shape: brown, round

Hair: curly dark brown stops at mid back

scars: she has 2. 1 on her knee from being scracthed by a cat and the other on her arm from being scratched by another cat.

Build: stick figure

Formal Clothe: she'd rather wear a tux

Regular Clothes:blue flare jeans, dark purple short sleaved shirt, black & white cardigain

Likes: rodeos, drawing, barns, drag queens, exploshions

Dislikes: brushing her hair, puppets, robots

Personality: she is usally level headed but she can have a firey temper. She can be discribed as a wild fire and she will be stuborn when she wants to. She also trys to be funny but it normally comes off as weird.

Star Sign: aries

Quote:as dark as it sounds the whole system sucks! It takes a real man to do drag. Insert Words Here(yes she says this when she trys to be funny) In order to have safe snacks always remember the condument(she also quotes a bunch of random stuff)

Quick Backstory: her life was normal but she found it dull she she started archery and shooting guns and drawing then came Mr ol' earthquake

Would you like your character to be met along the way to Ft. Omaha, or to be met in Ft. Omaha? met along the way please

Is the oc nice or rude to characters?: Y/N/Depends If so which ones and why: nice normally but she can be a bit rude