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iCY the Polar Kid 4/9/12 . chapter 2Sweet. Really looking forward to the real thing. Although there was something I wanted to address... I thought this particular line: "...you need to analyze all these weapons..." sounded funny with the world -analyze-... because it sounds so technical and very scientific-like in this case... I'd go with 'study' although that may not be the best of word choice for it either but it's up to you. Just a suggestion I thought might help :] Keep it real until then. -iCY- |
iCY the Polar Kid 4/9/12 . chapter 1I like this! It's so original and it's pretty darn funny. Heh. :] Definitely going to enjoy this series, that I know for sure. |
MAD ZAC 4/7/12 . chapter 1I nliked the idea |