|Reviews for Keepers of the Gods Previews|
| iCY the Polar Kid 4/9/12 . chapter 2
Sweet. Really looking forward to the real thing.
Although there was something I wanted to address...
I thought this particular line:
"...you need to analyze all these weapons..."
sounded funny with the world -analyze-... because it sounds so technical and very scientific-like in this case...
I'd go with 'study' although that may not be the best of word choice for it either but it's up to you. Just a suggestion I thought might help :]
Keep it real until then.
| iCY the Polar Kid 4/9/12 . chapter 1
I like this! It's so original and it's pretty darn funny. Heh. :]
Definitely going to enjoy this series, that I know for sure.
| MAD ZAC 4/7/12 . chapter 1
I nliked the idea