|Reviews for The Real Me|
| Small Wings Flying 4/8/12 . chapter 1
Truth be told, I'm having a particularly hard time reading this. I think you're jumping too fast from one thing to another, not really letting any images sink in. Speaking of image, I think some metaphors wouldn't have gone amiss in here. As a summary it's intriguing, but it does fall short from what I've come to expect, from your other poems.
| MoroseEcstasy 4/8/12 . chapter 1
Very cool. I really like how you choose to be who you are and not conform, and how you are the real you !