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ooooohhhh, this is really good! I love this! *favorites*

I love the beauty and love portrayed by the characters. it felt like I was the guy watching the girl he loved with all his heart and would do anything for her. The suspense of death at the end shocked and scared me. I can feel the fear and worry the guy must being feeling. Questions arise about what happened. Please continue so I may know the outcome. ;)