|Reviews for Distorted Halo|
| DarkInkyDreamer 4/19/12 . chapter 1
I like some of the phrasing in here it's very clever especially the last section 'I'm down on my knees, but i'll learn to crawl.' Unfortunately my tick for mistakes was acting up but I was able to see past that because of the messages and beautiful words in this.
| breakmyfall91 4/11/12 . chapter 1
whoop whoop! good stuff girl!