I love this! the only thing that bothers me is that they keep stuttering and I can't read it like that. I have a suggestion for what you can do instead. For example, when Alli asked Peter out you could have written something like {"Will you, do you, do you want to be my boyfirend?" Alli asked, blushing.} Or something like {"Do you want to be my boyfriend?" Alli asked me, stuttering.}

OMG this is the cutest story ever! :D

If it's finished you might wanna put the little completed sign on it... Just sayin

Aww, what a cute ending(:

Love sucks. But that's what happens when you're a teenager. Gawd I'm so lonely right now and these dumb (okay, so they're good) romance stories are not helping.

Holy crap, kid cries like a waterfall.

Nyehh! Hearts. Poor kid. He just wants to deny his love for Alli.

liked it!

one suggestion tho: the giggling...just dont go overboard with it. i dont think i have ever heard a guy giggle...just sayin.

update soon!

So cute3

The drunk talking was a little annoying but I can't wait to read more. Please keep writing :)

I like it_

Cute, but I have to say the way you did the drunk speak annoyed me a bit. But They're cute.

Woah. Abrupt ending.

Ah, were to begin?

the fact that the summary made me burst into hysterical fits of laughter already had me sold.

and it helps that this piece of awesomeness is titled 'straight boy lessons 101'

it's so obvious Peter is a flaming homo on the inside.. i can just picture the 'homophobic seal rage meme' going 'gayyyyyy' in the background. I hope you understand internet language or that could have been confusing. if not, ignore me.

Anyway, i loved this, please continue i will look forward to your updates :D

Sounds promising! Can't wait for more!