ooo this was cool. i really like all the detail. great job! is there gonna be more cause its status says complete but it doesn't seem like it is and the summary makes it seem like theres much more too it.

and what happened? have you disappeared off the face of the earth?

Try not centering the story. The details were really good, this really needs more reviews. I see a lot of potential and cannot wait to read more of your work!

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