|Reviews for Remnants of St Greaves Academy|
| freddyburn 7/1/12 . chapter 12
Like it. Cold, calculating and adds further to the plot. Just one little thing: "Recommended termination of approximately 6%." Should that be "Recommending termination?"
| Luke Kindred 6/30/12 . chapter 12
| freddyburn 6/21/12 . chapter 11
Love how things are coming together... hope you update soon
| Luke Kindred 6/21/12 . chapter 11
Update soon _
| freddyburn 6/11/12 . chapter 10
Ha Ha... loving it. Can't complain about the lenght- everything is good. You really have me hooked
| Luke Kindred 6/10/12 . chapter 10
I feel really bad for him. To be lied to by everyone and end up being told he's going to die no matter how smart he is. Can't wait for more!
| Luke Kindred 5/21/12 . chapter 9
Aw! Thanks for the shutout! And it was a really cool chapter! I can't wait to read more about Bruce and travel further into this story! Great job! And no it's not going that fast
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 9
To answere your question- Yes, the story is moving a bit too fast. Now I have a question or two:
1) Is the main character loosing it?
2) What is his name?
3) What the freaking hell is going on?
Adding this story to alerts and fav's.
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 8
Your chapters capture my attention, but, alas, I think you know what I am about to say, thus, I won't say it.
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 7
Interesting, but, again, short. You have some great ideas, but you are not doing them justice with the lenght of your chapters
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 6
Given my last review, this may seem a bit hypocritical, but capital letters are important- Titanic for example. In this instance, you are using the word in refernce to the ship, thus it gets a capital letter. If you are describing something as titanic (as in, it is big), you give it a small letter. And more detail is needed- this chapter was way too short.
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 5
hmmm... maybe a bit more discription of the office and mr grayhunt
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 4
nice discriptions of Jeff
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 3
I am liking this story more and more
| freddyburn 5/21/12 . chapter 2
another short chapter, but still interesting