you've written a nice, powerful narrative and it'd be interesting to see a short story from this or of any subject from you.

but vagueness has its worth and, in this, you clearly realize how to bend it best for understanding, how to fracture the tangible hurt to mirror the sore reflections of most everyone.

there's a lot of talk and piercing images of brokenness and reassembling: the former's many sources and the consequences of getting too close when you want to be anything but alone. an exemplary prototype of angsty stream-of-consciousness monologue, and never, thankfully, irritatingly pitiful or unintelligible. bravo.

Thank you for sharing this.