|Reviews for The Story|
| Ram Attra 4/24/12 . chapter 1
love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!
man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.
and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)
Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!
| A Story In The End 4/18/12 . chapter 1
Why hello, Terff! It is I, A Story In The End.
Anyway, excellent first chapter. I really enjoyed it. There were one or two slight grammatical errors, but overall, it was epic.
I am looking forward to the next chapters.
(Oh, and if you are interested, I have a story on FanFiction. It's called The Secrets Of The Sands.)