I like this haiku a lot because it has imagery and a simile. I liked the: "The water as blue as a/Sapphire in light".

I am guessing this one is about greek mythology from the title Cassiopeia. Maybe you could lengthen this one into a narrative style poem. Just a thought.

Art is something that needs to be expressed. It invokes passion, beauty and creativity. No offense, but this haiku does not invoke passion, beauty and creativity to me.

I would revise this one.

I like it but I don't nesscarily agree that rainbows are illusions. A rainbow to me usually invokes hope, pride, equality and peace.

I agree to disagree with you.

I would revise this one.

I liked the previous one a lot better. The previous haiku about dandelions evoked a lot more emotion and image to me.

With this one, I don't feel a certain way.

I agree with you. I think Dandelions are the people who are persistant and try hard despite adversity.

When people's thoughts change that mean they are growing as a person. Their minds are changing. I am guessing you are in secondary school and if you are, then it is okay that this happens. Middle School and High School is a time for exploration. We don't stop growing in our minds ever, but in those years one develops the most mentally.

I think this haiku is okay, not great.

I would revise this one.

You are doing much better at writing these haikus.

I could see the improvement from the first haiku in this set.

Keep writing and editing.

I liked this and I could tell you meant lightning. Great word choice and imagery.

I like this one a lot because it is well written (has a lot of imagery that evokes emotion).

I would edit this one and revise it. I didn't feel anything, but I thought it was too cliche.

Best one I have read so far.

I thought it was clever that sometimes a word someone says can feel ugly, but is meant to beautiful.

I thought this haiku had a good point (you would rather have faults and be flawed then be naive and kind hearted).

Consider lengthing this to an actual poem. This is just a thought of mine.

This haiku was much better. I thought it was about that you cannot judge someone on the outside because they may have a prickly and angry inside.