Ezra can read thoughts? I am a little confused about that. Thank you for updating finally!

Write more please! This chapter was too short...I think you've made Ani throw up too many times. You should make her start banging head against walls instead:) Great job!

More information is needed. How can her sister be a vampire if she's a pixie? Is the world human dominated? Where exactly was she before this facility? Also, make it clearer what this facility is. Describe her, the other character's, and their home in depth. Good, but it just needs more clarification.

love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!

man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.

and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!

LOL "tapped that ass", "that ass is my sister"

Update & i'll keep reading. only question is..Is ezra a girl or boy ? ._.

R&R some of my work please? not to sound like a begger..lol.