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| Barbados 4/15/12 . chapter 1
Early on in the poem I got the feeling of trying too hard to make things rhyme. As I read on, I realized that wasn't the case.
There is some really good imagery throughout, and it feels very much like an outpouring of sincere faith.
My favorite line was, "The only object standing in your way, will be the hands on a clock face"