Lol, just when things are looking up, bad things happen to these girls! Hmm, wonder who the woman is? Seems very...powerful, just by her stance alone lol. And wow, wonder what happened to the Commander? o.O Then again...do I care?...Hmm...he was always a dick, lol. Well if someone was able to get to him that way, then whoever did it is obviously very powerful! Please update soon!

Wow, those were some bad dreams for the Queen! And that's strange with Christina! I hope these girls can figure out what's going on!

Amy definitely has the best powers! I would love to be able to summon a phoenix, haha, or have fire powers xD
Good thing everyone's safe now, and I wonder what the maid was saying to Christina? Hopefully something not bad... everyone's been through a lot, lol. The second half of this chapter's tense changed to present, so you should change it back to past-tense. :)

Awwww hopefully everyone recovers all right! :) That was an epic fight scene.

Poor Jason, i feel bad for that whole group. At least the angels got to them! :)

Sooo glad the guys are all right! Any of their deaths would be devastating :( Guess it's time for the ladies to kick ass! :) I hope they get rid of the Commander for good this time! He's such a cocky bastard.

Wow, that was really intense! I hope they're able to get through it!

Oh wow! Great retaliation from the guys! No knocking them down, haha. I seriously thought they were going to die :(( But they worked really well together for that final move! (Though, hope it's not their FINAL move, haha...) Also, I love this song lol. xD Hope James will make it through after this!

Wow, Jeff and Jason fought really well together! Oh no, is Jeff going to die? :( D: Great fight scene and of course your spectacular cliff hanger! xD Better update soon! Glad you are focusing on other characters as well :)

Whoa, epic fight scene! I hope Jeff is alright!

Glad the guys are all right! I hope they kill those women! :O Great chapter, and really good descriptions!

That was really interesting with the book and the transformations! Hopefully they can save everyone!

Damn, cliffhanger! D: The cat/bunny animal is soo cute! :3 You did really well on the descriptions of everyone's attire! Another exciting chapter, can't wait for the next!

Wow! SHe's going to be a queen! That's epic, but i'm wondering what challenges this will bring and how it will work out with the little experience she has...Very interesting, i'm looking forward to the next!

Glad Sky isn't dead! He IS a good brother :) Doubt any of my brothers would do that for me... *mumbles* Cute scene with Christina and Jason! :D Lol I laughed when Madison said that she got the pic on her iphone xDDDD Can't wait for next chapter! :))