That was pretty freakin funny.

love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!

man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.

and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!

Story o my life.

Story o my life.

I like how you made an extremely realistic situation and made it funny and true. Nice job.

I find it amusing how something that short could be so very telling about the human psyche. Very well done. I was laughing the entire time I read it and it is so very, very true.

Thank you for writing!