I really liked it. It was a really different way of looking at high school. I guess its like that for some people! :-( I loved the tongue bordeaux steel! It was really clever! Loved it :-D

An interesting perspective on the "high school experience", one that I happen to share, and that I suspect is not uncommon. The image of tongues "that can cut like Bordeaux steel" was very evocative, and the final line was quite spiteful. I liked it. Good job! :)

I'm moving up to high school soon, getting to not wear a bloody awful uniform, and this is exactly how I feel about the people who bully me at my school. You're truly an incredible writer.

Thank you for sharing this as it made me think.