Wow, thats intese and completely unexpected. I love the comparison between slavery (what I had expected the poem to be about) and tears falling. I love the way you personfied the tears, and the way that the words twist in the middle o shatter preconcieved notions to reveal the tru subject matter. Excellent job! Keep Writing!

I really liked this. Its was interesting in a good way. It really made you think! I loved the bit about her defenses! It was really cool! :-D Nice job!

Interesting.