I like these, it's like reading a story...only with less words. :)

Very good! All the poems flow nicely, leaving behind a philosiphical, dramatic, and/or depressing thought. They are all quite powerful, and the titles are very appropriate. Your adjectives are moving and I find it very...er, how to say this...well, it is extremely thought-provoking. One correction, though: (Chapter 3, Line 4)

"To young, to juvenile they tell me" should be "Too young, too juvenile they tell me."

Great job and I hope to read more!