This was really good Neverland! It was full of emotion and well written, I felt like I was there almost like I was Thea. Write more we wanna see chapter 10 soon!

I can't believe he left Thea for Tanya. That psycho.

OMG.

I can't believe Tanya slapped her.

Aiden is such a jerk he made a promise and now he basically just broke her heart.

OMG! JKHASRKJAHSJKFHAJSKF THIS IS AMAZING! you better update soon! mkae aidan jealous! SERIOUSLY.

DO IT.

she should go out with chris and make him jealous

This made my realy upset! :( poor Heather! But this is such a good story and it's my favourite one! I absolutly LOVE the hunger games xx

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm a little sad that Thea is being treated this way, but then I think about how I'd feel if my boyfriend was choosing another girl over me. I would hope that he would put a little space in between him and the friend, or at least invite me along to hang out as well. I think Aidan could have done this all in a better way. Good job! I'm looking forward to the mix of emotions that I'll feel in the next chapter. It's ok to not give your audience what they want. I think it gets them more involved in the story.

Wow this was just amazing :) it was very well written keep up the good work. Can't wait to find out what happens next

Firstly you're wrong. Wolverine is the best ever superhero. It's basically a universally accepted fact.

And secondly, story- wise, it's really good :)

I actually kind of like how Aidan and Thea didn't get together, it is a bit too soon. I kind of want Thea to go out with Chris first :)

Damn you Aidan! Too mean, way too mean! oh and Hunger Games, good film i have all the books too but haven't read them yet :(

aww that made me sad!

also hunger games are awesome! been obsessed for over a year now. if you havent already read the book, i would advise you to haha

I love this story GO THEA! I would've slapped her too THEA AND AIDEN BELONG TOGETHER PLEASE MAKE THEM GET TOGETHER

This chapter made me laugh cos I probably would have slapped her too :D great chapter ]

This is really good :)

It's a bit short, and some things are a little rushed, but the characters are cool and the plot seems to be really interesting.

Also, I'm so totally going to see the avengers next week and dragging my best friend along because I don't want to look dorky on my own watching superheroes :)

hehe. she said rue. update soon! :)