VERY FUNNY!

but I'm tired of people using the c word.

What the HECK? Awesome story, but it made no sense! My favorite kind ...

I will never treat napkins the same again.

love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!

man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.

and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!