|Reviews for Daydream|
| Shauni Cooper 4/20/12 . chapter 1
This was good. I enjoy how you described her daydreaming as being lost in another world, that is what its mostly about. Disappearing and letting your inner thoughts and dreams take you away. I also liked what' True Talker' said about your poem; made me think more about that other character making an attempt to get into that other world. Very well done, I enjoyed it very much. :)
As always, keep writing!
| True Talker 4/17/12 . chapter 1
It is actually beautiful yet sad why because maybe the one who is reaching she wants him to find her. You write this quite well and it had made me think.