|Reviews for Two Halves|
| zakiyya 12/24/12 . chapter 20
Ok now, Dylan Needs to get beat up by Shane. I feel like he could do it. N Nate needs to go dupe Dylan. N I like how Nate is sticking up to his voice. Good Job.
| Miyuki31393 12/14/12 . chapter 19
I have no idea how I lost this story. I had to find it again, along with a few other stories I lost when FP updated.
I'm glad that I did.
| LittleMonster13 12/2/12 . chapter 19
"And the two halves fight all the way to school." -title of the story. Perfect. Mad respect.
I just frantically texted Nathan: "It's happening. Nathan told Shane he loves him. Omfg."
And then Nathan runs off. -_-
AAAHHHHH I cannot believe it THE TIME IS UPON US Nathan is BREAKING DOWN and healing himself.
"YOU FUCKING WHORE. YOU'RE THE WORST PERSON WHO EVER LIVED. I HOPE YOU KILL YOURSELF RIGHT FUCKING NOW. YOU DESERVE TO DIE AND BURN IN HELL. YOU ARE...
Shh... Shane's here." -he even ignored the voice! Whooooo!
I am so ecstatic yet also worried. I don't want any more suicidal surprises missy.
Much much much so much love! I can't wait for the next chapter! (Seriously, I cannot wait).
P.S. As soon as I get a Twitter I'm following you. I do have a Facebook though! :D
P.P.S FOUR TIMES WHAT OMFG I JUST DIED I AM SO JELLY AAAAAAHHHHHHH!
| Linq 11/30/12 . chapter 19
Oh goooddd dat anxiety.
You're really good at this, you know! Making me feel all depressed and anxious just by reading this! Yeah, I can definitely feel some of Nate's pain; especially 'coz I'm in a situation similar to this in my life XD
I loved this chapter and I understand how things like a simple "I love you" can just happen and how much they effect the situation for the better or the worst.
I'm looking forward for an update :)
| daniel 11/30/12 . chapter 19
oh god I was so moved by this chapter! why can't nate see that his "friends" don't care about him? when can he see the one who truly cares is right in front of him? I almost broke down when he did, that was a brilliant chapter update right away!
| MagnificentFern 11/29/12 . chapter 19
3 of course I will keep reading ! I can relate to most of Nate's feelings and I kinda hoped that Nate's black bone or rampage mode, or rage (I don't know how to call it) after his "fuck you" message would have carried on the next day, but it's really hard to let go of the "I am fine" image you have to put on at all times with others... so I should really have expected him to do everything to erase the situation altogether, like I would have were I in his place. Only Shane insistent prodding could crumble that image I guess, good for him for doing his best !
I don't know how Nate will deal with his love declaration, especially since he already has a boyfriend. He wanted to say it so much that even our author Kat Smart couldn't prevent him from doing so ! Nate is more powerful that he wants us to believe ! Go Nate go ! :D but don't take over Kat completely !
And to comment on ShanePebblez's review, I also feel good with the pace of the story, if that was something you were worried about. Also this story is nowhere near ending, this is excellent news for me since I like it very much :D
I am sorry for the many mistakes, I lack some sleep to be able to write my thoughts in proper English #_# I tried ! I had to read the new chapter before going to bed.
Thanks for the update, I will of course be there for the next chapter :) Cheers !
| Zakiyya 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Ugh,i dont like Dylan. it just like Maximum Ride. People with the name Dylan I swear! All the Dylans i know are ass holes n idk why.
| xSuperiorex 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Oh wow. This chapter was just...wow. Like, I can't even put into words hoe excellent this was. I might say this chapter is on Beyonce level. Just, seriously. It made me feel. I felt this weird feeling in my stomach. That has never happened to me before. Ever. I don't even know what to say, just that Nathan needs to dump Dylan, like, now. This was just so good.
| Coli Narago 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Yay! More Shane! 3
Okay, this is now my favorite chapter so far. Seriously, it is. I love Shane's reactions to all of the signals Nathan is sending out, and I love the intense emotion going on right now.
I'm so glad that they're finally getting somewhere as far as romance goes. :D
Now, the real question... What was Dylan's text reply? I know Nathan doesn't care, but I do, dammit!
| Skyless-11 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Wooooooooot action, lots of action! heartbreaking, loveable, cute, sad, angry, happy, hopeful, incredibly glad :D and it also came quite fast o.o I can't waaaaaaaaait to see what happens next chapter! and I thought the other one was a climax o.o
Moreover, I am super-mega-giga happy that this is "nowhere near the end"! 3 yayyy!
Thanks for your hard work! et bring the next oneee :
| Ney13 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Lol, I really did enjoy. It was great, and I can't wait to see where you take this:)
| JHeartbreak 11/29/12 . chapter 19
Great use of the title in there! It made me think. I guess I always interpreted the two halves as the two boys, and then also Nathan and Shane. But this is another great interpretation - the two halves of Nathan - the life-impulse and the death-impulse in him.
You did so good with this chapter. It really was emotional. I like the push and pull of wanting to be heard, but being unable to speak out. It's very real. It reminds me of a Neil Young song - "Can't relate to joy / tries to speak and / he can't begin to say."
The "I love you" was perfect. I'm not surprised that you didn't think it up yourself, because it's not the kind of thing you can plan. It's a sudden vulnerability, a revealed thing. And it really rings true. It's the best "I love you" you've written - your other stories were good, but you brooded over the I love you part - it felt planned rather than springing naturally from the characters. I never held it against you because it's a hard thing to plan, and hard not to plan either. So you did really well here.
The last two chapters have had me really engrossed. I can't wait for what comes next.
| Aletiah 11/29/12 . chapter 19
I love the part when Nathan tells Shane that he loves him. It feels so true and honest!
| MagnificentFern 11/22/12 . chapter 18
Of course we enjoy getting an update ! :D The least I can do is write a review :) I really liked this chapter (my love for drama shall not die), and this is following a path I like very much !
| LittleMonster13 11/22/12 . chapter 18
Oh. My. GOD.
Happy fucking Thanksgiving, right? xD
I JUST WANT HIM TO REALIZE IT'S OKAY TO LOVE SHANE. And then have glorious sex with Shane.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh. The waiting is killing me.
I hope Shane sees these cuts and does something about it. :c
I thought Nathan was making progress! :c
Mm. I'm sad.
But thank you for the update. The beginning wasn't too bad ;D.
P.S. I am very glad to hear I crack you up xD.