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   sweetladyjane2012 5/16/13 . chapter 12Boy some people really have no shame don't they...LOL. Sort of a quirky but funny chapter... |
| earthday 5/16/13 . chapter 12 Wow! What a great chapter! Jamie's really going to get himself mixed up in something, I reckon, and I can't wait to find out what! I also wonder what Walter will think if he gets any idea of what Jamie thinks about Sid! And two great twists at the end of the chapter as well - really kept up the intrigue! :) |
| marginal-utility 5/16/13 . chapter 12 I don't get where this story is going... |
| sweetladyjane2012 4/21/13 . chapter 11 Is the biggest cattle ranch in America really in Hawaii? That sounds kind of quirky...another great chapter, looking forward to more hot action between Walter and Jamie...:P |
| earthday 4/20/13 . chapter 11 Somehow I must have missed the chapter before this new one so I read that too and wow, this story is really heating up! It's really fun (and deliciously naughty lol!) and I just love the characters involved. I wonder what else Walter has in mind for Jamie? ;) |
| marginal-utility 4/20/13 . chapter 11 All the male aroma is probably short circuiting Jamie's brain. |
| sweetladyjane2012 4/10/13 . chapter 10 Wow, that was pretty hot! I thought the part about Jamie coming all over the dishes and them having to be washed again was simply hilarious...I never would have thought of including something like that myself but now I'm tempted to 'steal' it for one of my own stories...LOL |
| marginal-utility 4/7/13 . chapter 10 Swimsuit and frilly apron...Walter must have liked that! ;) |
| Anon M 2/9/13 . chapter 9 Walter kind of freaks me out because he's such a...hard to read character-if that makes any sense. Jamie's awesome. I'm loving the story, super curious about what happens next. Update soon, please! |
| earthday 2/9/13 . chapter 9 Wow, what a great new chapter! This is one of my favourites of your stories - I just love Jamie's character! And Sid seems really interesting too. Can't wait to see some more of the dynamics and chemistry between Walter and Jamie! :) |
| sweetladyjane2012 2/5/13 . chapter 9 Wow, it sure sounds to me like Sid has a thing for Jamie himself...wouldn't that be awkward...LOL |
| marginal-utility 2/5/13 . chapter 9 Creepy |
| marginal-utility 12/16/12 . chapter 8 Jamie sure complains a lot. It would be nicer to say, sure i like pecan pie, to the woman who is cooking you dinner. |
| earthday 12/15/12 . chapter 8 Ah I love the last sentence! Really nice way to round off the chapter! I love the way you portray the dynamics/relationship between Sheila, Jamie and Walter, especially in this chapter - I think this was the main thing that made this chapter so good :) |
| sweetladyjane2012 12/14/12 . chapter 8 Wish I were there because I looove pecan pie, better than apple pie to me...'up like a flagpole', nice imagery...:) |
