|Reviews for All bets are in|
| Tenshi no Yami 6/21/12 . chapter 3
Loving this as usual. Nothing wrong and I see that you started a new paragraph with each new speaker. Fantastic! Anything out of place? Not per se though the use of 'lied' should be changed. I did know what you meant though! I really did!
As for that alleged 'colorful puppet', I wanna' know more about that! :3
As for that rabit-turned- woman, that is kinda' scary.
Update this soon!
| leofrost 5/3/12 . chapter 2
Can you keep going with the story? Thanks.;
| Tigers and Melons 5/1/12 . chapter 1
The idea is very good! I happen to love swordsman stories! but the actual writing of the story needs just a teensy bit of work. Watch out for repeating words and every time a new character speaks, you should start a new paragraph. Other than that, I look forward to seeing more!
| Tenshi no Yami 5/1/12 . chapter 2
Ha, Hina is a little evil girl. I like her.
You finally updated! A plus.
As usual, nice chapter. Few grammar mistakes but other than that, it was good.
Liked the flashback bit.
And sixty miles? Ha, Hina just waited to throw it out there -
| Tenshi no Yami 4/19/12 . chapter 1
Wani-Han and Ari-Han.
Half gator and half ant.
Check and check
It's very interesting to say the least. I wonder how Jin managed to get snared in that situation.
More please XD
| Shado-chan 4/19/12 . chapter 1
O_O That's just amazing. I've never heard of a half-aligator or half-ant, but everything about this story sounds amazing. Keep it up! :D