Sounds to me like a treatment for writers block, hmm? No, but I liked it a lot. It has kind of an adventurous feel to it.

I liked the free flow of this one. It was very well worded and well storied, even though that's not even it. Sweet satisfaction very much so. Good job.

Love this poem especially the lines Scramble up mountains of paper And swim through cascades of ink. You capture the daunting task that is taking tests and the sweet rewards that follow perfectly.

It's good for being written with a lack of sleep, and it makes the subject of school definetly more interesting.

-kitty