Interesting story though when someone says something you should put "..." I said. It has to be right after it.

i think you should continue this story.

I noticed quite a few grammar and sentence structure issues, something I have seen quite commonly with authors who also write poetry. You had some problems introducing detail and imagery,

(**cough cough** i could be your beta reader and help you with all of this stuff **cough cough**)

The story had a perfect ending, though, and i honestly wouldn't recommend adding another chapter to it, since it ended so nicely. but, of course, it's up to you.

However, I do think it would be cool if you wrote another story, this time more about the "leader of the pack." she seemed like quite an interesting, mysterious character, and i would love to hear more about her world.