Do you know what it's like to travel for years, to search for something that you know you'll never find, but you keep searching, because if you give up then that's it, there's no more hope. -This sentence seems a bit long to be, but oh well And there's also a place where you have a double negative, and two since's right now to each other. Other than that I can't wait for the next chapters in your story. I will be honest as of yet, I've only read chapter one so far. I am in school, and only have so much class time to read this. I will read more of this later when I have time. Love the story,

-Kitty

This one's very goood And I'll be expecting your chapters soon!

I'm sorry if I resorted to being anonymous, trust me, i tried very hard to log in but just can't. Damn FP. And my internet speed is not helping...

Please update soon!