Not Bad. But as a poet, you still have a lot to improve. You can get a lot better... Try.

I am not a zombie, I once tried to fallow what everyone was doing, but I gave up and continued along my own battered path. And these trends are to easy to predict, it's sad.

Vary nice poem.

It definitely does NOT suck! It's really good! It kinda reminds of this thing I found online: .

Soooo true.

Of course, we all have our place in society, but we should make it look individual.

We're not dead yet, so we can make a difference to the rest.

I liked this!

I actually enjoyed this quite a bit. I know many people who are "zombiefied". Good job.

It was Awesome but why put it in humor?

I really loved this one! I think that it's actually a bit too heavy to be labeled "humor," which makes it deeper.

(also, i love how you've adapted your usual supernatural style to mean something more. that was great!)

Cool poem, very true message. Nice job :)