Wow. Spectacular. I am in awe.

The imagery you used here was fantastic. I loved all the metaphors, like skipping the prologue and chapters for the last page, and the wine and vinegar. It's such a well-crafted piece, the words placed perfectly and just amazing all around.

(By the way, thank you ever so much for all your kind reviews :] Made my day, they did.)

Yes, sometimes the satisfaction hangover can be so bitter that we would have done better to leave the curiosity bottle unopened.

Wow this was amazing poetry.

Kitty