Oh she wished herself too thin to survive. I think there's a wonderfully told meaning in this and the form is very nicely done. I will include it in the community, it fits in there and it's a very good story.

A wonderfully written tale. And sting! That goes right to the heart. The message is perfectly clear and well portrayed.

Beautiful:) that's all I have to say I'm afraid.

This is quite a unique tale. Good job...

Good story, she should have quit while she was ahead.

This is a lovely written fic, lightly but meaningfully told with a simple but neat and effective ending. Nice use of language with just enough words to capture her at each stage.

About interactive fics - I often wish they were allowed to, but alas.

Happy writing!