|Reviews for The End is Where You Begin|
| my.life.is.over 5/26/12 . chapter 1
This is really good, too. Keep up the amazing work. :)
| Rogue Energizer Bunny 4/28/12 . chapter 1
Eeeh, more poetry. Yay!
I like this consept. Ooh, that's not how you spell it. LOL.
| blackabyss1 4/26/12 . chapter 1
Nice poem, I think you're starting to get he hang of it, now, well done and please write more, your poems seem so thoughtful, I'm sure you put a lot of effort into this, so thank ou for that, and I'm sure there are many more great poems to come from you.
| bloodyamore 4/25/12 . chapter 1
it is like the cycle of seasons, death and rebirth.
i like it, and i admire the easy way you rhyme, nothing seems forced.
a little constructive critism:
to me, although that is up to you to decide if it matters, the ending seems a little empty. like it's missing something. Although in a way this is good, because it can take a reader ' back to the beginning' so to speak.
also, in the line "And there is little to keep from falling off the ledge", did you perhaps mean "little to keep -you- from falling"?