This is really good, too. Keep up the amazing work. :)

Eeeh, more poetry. Yay!

I like this consept. Ooh, that's not how you spell it. LOL.

-REB

Nice poem, I think you're starting to get he hang of it, now, well done and please write more, your poems seem so thoughtful, I'm sure you put a lot of effort into this, so thank ou for that, and I'm sure there are many more great poems to come from you.

it is like the cycle of seasons, death and rebirth.

i like it, and i admire the easy way you rhyme, nothing seems forced.

a little constructive critism:

to me, although that is up to you to decide if it matters, the ending seems a little empty. like it's missing something. Although in a way this is good, because it can take a reader ' back to the beginning' so to speak.

also, in the line "And there is little to keep from falling off the ledge", did you perhaps mean "little to keep -you- from falling"?