|Reviews for shimmer|
| a theoretic revolution 5/17/12 . chapter 1
| recycle rhymes 5/7/12 . chapter 1
I really liked the imagery and the way that it ended, nice work.
| electrical moon 4/24/12 . chapter 1
Great poem! I love the imagery, particularly 'cellophane wrapped eyes' and 'she predicts a graceful explosion of bittersweet spots'. A little technical advice: if you hit shift enter when you're writing it you make the poem single-spaced.