Yikes Krea is scary. Well done with the rest of your chapters I can really see this becoming a popular novel one day. i just love the characters and story so much.

Yay good for Callie and I like Eos. He's awesome!

Oh my :/ This story just gets better and better.

It's getting intense now and Krea sounds scary and horrible. Nice characterization though.

I'm still hoping Callie gets out and meets Will and Lottie soon so Lottie could say "I told you so" :D Lottie is my favorite hehe.

oH NONONONO. I hope she gets out of this. i'm on the edge of my seat now.

Lovely. Get out of there Callie!

Love the herald in your story. The ending is sweet too. now i can't wait to read Callie and Will finally meeting each other.

Ha poor Will thinks he's gone crazy. Loved this chapter.

Amazing now I'm determined to figure out what the place is too. :D

Nice again. I really love lottie she's so smart for an 8 year old and totally lovable.

A great chapter. So Will really thinks Callie must be from his imagination. This is really getting interesting. On to the next chapter.

I love this story. I love the character Callie, I feel that if you publish this story as a book in the future a lot of little girls and teenagers will find something in common with her.

There were a couple misspellings here and there, and some areas need some more detail like when Callie thought she was in real life at one point but wasn't it needs more explanations so audiences wont get confused with what is actually happening. And also explain more with the past and present.

Other then that it's great. You need to write a short story of this for either cosmo or readers digest.