|Reviews for The Last Light Callie's story|
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 22
Yikes Krea is scary. Well done with the rest of your chapters I can really see this becoming a popular novel one day. i just love the characters and story so much.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 21
Yay good for Callie and I like Eos. He's awesome!
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 20
Oh my :/ This story just gets better and better.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 19
It's getting intense now and Krea sounds scary and horrible. Nice characterization though.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 18
I'm still hoping Callie gets out and meets Will and Lottie soon so Lottie could say "I told you so" :D Lottie is my favorite hehe.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 16
oH NONONONO. I hope she gets out of this. i'm on the edge of my seat now.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 15
Lovely. Get out of there Callie!
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 13
Love the herald in your story. The ending is sweet too. now i can't wait to read Callie and Will finally meeting each other.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 12
Ha poor Will thinks he's gone crazy. Loved this chapter.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 11
Amazing now I'm determined to figure out what the place is too. :D
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 10
Nice again. I really love lottie she's so smart for an 8 year old and totally lovable.
| JanePoleRa 6/1/12 . chapter 9
A great chapter. So Will really thinks Callie must be from his imagination. This is really getting interesting. On to the next chapter.
| JanePoleRa 5/4/12 . chapter 5
I love this story. I love the character Callie, I feel that if you publish this story as a book in the future a lot of little girls and teenagers will find something in common with her.
There were a couple misspellings here and there, and some areas need some more detail like when Callie thought she was in real life at one point but wasn't it needs more explanations so audiences wont get confused with what is actually happening. And also explain more with the past and present.
Other then that it's great. You need to write a short story of this for either cosmo or readers digest.