First off I thought that your imagery here was dazzling. "Angel wings" and "fairy dust" are very powerful motifs that are drilled into most little girls from birth. I think all girls strive to be something ethereal and magical at dome point in their lives. I do feel like the latter half is missing perspective. You go from metaphor to the moment: " we all fall in the end" a bit abruptly. I winder if you added some buffer right there it might make that transition smoother. I didn't care for your afterthought in () it didn't seem to fit with the rest of the narration.

Juliet.

Made me shudder, as much of your writing does. Hits right at the heart of it all, really, and its the sort of thing that makes me wish I could write poetry. Ah well. I'll leave it to you and all those others who do it fantastically. Stunning work.

- Moonstar

Great poem! Love the tone.

I don't see this as supernatural - more like a sad, inevitable truth.

"shook the last shimmers of fairy dust/off her dirty hands, and/shot a winning smile at you." ahhh, this was like- ajdakjd. ha ha. & i lovelove your profile pic penguins are just too adorbs. keep up the great work. :)