|Reviews for Bus Ride|
| Aleigh4evah 12/30/12 . chapter 1
Aw this is so cute in a sad sort of bittersweet way.
| WordsTasteLikeCaramel 4/30/12 . chapter 1
EEEEEEEE-*coughs* ahem, sorry (I'm excited)! WordsTasteLikeCaramel here- wanting to drop you another review! You've gotten so much better-I loved these bits the most: "To fall in love with me while we dance/And adore me as I twirl."
and "But it makes my mind/Believe, dream/Of a time just you and me."
It's such a beautiful, wonderous improvement- your poetry is growing into a lovely flower!
(Hope you don't mind me reviewing- but I saw that you put me on your favorite authors list and that made me ECSTATIC- really I am.)
| thetabbykitteh 4/26/12 . chapter 1
I liked this.