Aw this is so cute in a sad sort of bittersweet way.

EEEEEEEE-*coughs* ahem, sorry (I'm excited)! WordsTasteLikeCaramel here- wanting to drop you another review! You've gotten so much better-I loved these bits the most: "To fall in love with me while we dance/And adore me as I twirl."

and "But it makes my mind/Believe, dream/Of a time just you and me."

It's such a beautiful, wonderous improvement- your poetry is growing into a lovely flower!

(Hope you don't mind me reviewing- but I saw that you put me on your favorite authors list and that made me ECSTATIC- really I am.)

I liked this.

Kitty