|Reviews for The Stage|
| TheChaoticOne15 10/7/12 . chapter 2
| TheChaoticOne15 10/7/12 . chapter 1
I think this is a nice start, i just have a few complaints. You explained the MBI thing twice, and you didnt really explain the choice-maker. Other than that i think its interesting and i will read more when you update! (:
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap 5/7/12 . chapter 1
Interesting start. One thing I have to point out is that you mentioned the MBI twice and wrote, as I call it. Other than that redundancy, this story has promise and I look to see how it turns out.
| Calenture 4/26/12 . chapter 1
I liked it so far... Please continue! Update soon!
| thetabbykitteh 4/26/12 . chapter 1
die was supposed to be dive. Other than that I liked this- it is very creative.