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   TheChaoticOne15 10/7/12 . chapter 2Good chapter. |
| TheChaoticOne15 10/7/12 . chapter 1 I think this is a nice start, i just have a few complaints. You explained the MBI thing twice, and you didnt really explain the choice-maker. Other than that i think its interesting and i will read more when you update! (: |
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap 5/7/12 . chapter 1 Interesting start. One thing I have to point out is that you mentioned the MBI twice and wrote, as I call it. Other than that redundancy, this story has promise and I look to see how it turns out. |
| Calenture 4/26/12 . chapter 1 I liked it so far... Please continue! Update soon! |
| thetabbykitteh 4/26/12 . chapter 1 die was supposed to be dive. Other than that I liked this- it is very creative. Kitty |
