|Reviews for My Safe Escape|
| Vivace.Assai 7/25/12 . chapter 1
Wow... This was a short but beautiful piece. I loved the extended metaphor of the ongoing battle and how the arrows pierced the narrator. It is a simple and understandable metaphor, but it gave a certain poetic feel to the whole work. Furthermore, it makes sense - words can uplift or pain... So I really loved the metaphor.
You also depicted the emotions really well. I could just see her frustrations and pain. And when she arrives at her safe place, I can just sense the relief coursing through her. It's intriguing that her safety comes from the natural world though.
Great read. Thanks for sharing this!
| XxWriting MistressxX 5/24/12 . chapter 1
Wow. This is so good, your talent for writing is just incredible. This is just how I feel when my parents fight, except I lock myself in my room and start writing or reading. Excellent work!