I find your author's note at the end very manipulative.
It makes me feel bad for 'almost' just blatantly reading this work and leaving it for dust! Now, now I do not endorse in reviewing a lot of works but this had very fetching young characterized men.
Very adorable a tid bit fluffy

Ohhh, I liked this very much. Good job. c: I'll put it in my favorites too.

This is BRILLIANT and so was The Cat and the Canary! I think Cale is sooooo very cute with all his stuttering, aaaw he's just lovely. And Baisyl... well, what can I say! He's Amaaazing :D

I really really hope you will write another Baisyl/Cale story because I clearly love them! One of the best couples [not that they are quite at the couple stage... but still] ever on fp! [in my opinion of course]

By the way I love this bit:
"Honestly, I never fully understood the concept of a derogatory term for someone who enjoys sharing their body with a number of persons. Sex," Baisyl said, "…is quite natural, and enjoyable, no less, for however many parties are involved, presuming it's executed properly. Why should engaging in it give rise to such disparaging titles?"
...He's so deep!...

You write some really interesting stories with great detail in a short amount of story line given and I really like it that way too. Your one shots are really interesting, ive been reading QuanxDerik stories youve done, and I must say I‘ve been more wowed than ever I mean you write the most best yaoi ever and I love it. But I also love your plots no matter what which is real awesome. Thsnks for being such a freat writer!

Very good. I still like Cale very much, and love seeing the differences in Baisyl's behavior. I'm so glad you wrote this. I only wish I had read it sooner!-I am curious about Roanna;I kind of wish there had been more explanation behind that, but the story is wonderful nonetheless.

I'm loving Cale's adventures.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I believe that it was exceptionally well written and that the descriptions of the scene's and Cale's emotions are very well done. Good job.

wow great writing and plot (XD?)

just saw that it's an sequel though...good for me

so keep going *thumbs up*

I love the two oneshots for Cale and Baisyl as well as the main story! I really hope you write another about Cale/Baisyl. Their relationship is getting very interesting.

This is so good!

Very original, i'd like to read more of the plot behind it.

*just realized it's a sequel*

Right when they were talking about the horse's eating habits, I knew what it was. :D Super pleased of myself.. "Why did it turn him on so to be used like this?" Million dollar question. Freakin' Baisyl (how do you say that?) is so chill about the whole affair while Cale breaks so easily. I apparently didn't review the other story, but they both are brilliant. I just realized there's another whole story out there for Baisyl and I haven't read it yet. . People these days. Anyways. Lovely as always. And when I find time (whether imaginary or real) I will read the other story. And probably review every few chapters. This will not be the last of me!

This turned out to be a weird review.

Luck writing, living, breathing.. ;]

ibbit

You know, I think I like this one more, myself. I like Cale as a character. I hope to see more of these Baisyl/Cale shorts, or some sort of extended Cale story independent of his sex with Baisyl. Anyway, nice job on this one. It was fun to read.

I loved this. I have yet to read The Cat and The Canary as I need time to give it some attention. I love Baisyl's character so much. I also like Cale.

I will read Baisyl's story eventually. It's on my to do list.

Thanks for this, it shows that you took a long time to write it, it flows and shines.

DS

Aaaw, see I want it to work out for Cale now but I know that Baisyl ends up with Kedean :( even though I love Kedean and want them to be together. I feel so conflicted :S

I like seeing how Baisyl used to be :)

Katy