| Reviews for A collection of haikus |
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ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 21How about "daily ignorance" or " daily rot"? Feel free to say no, I won't take offense, I assure you. 3 |
ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 17This one seems extra poetic; really pretty. |
ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 14Lol, I get jealous of girls when I'm dating someone. This is what I feel. ) |
ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 13I really like this one. Shows sacrifice. |
ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 3Absolutely true. |
ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 1Definitely writer's block! Lol, I like it. |
Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 21Disgust? That's the word that came into my mind. |
Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 15I would prefer winking eyes, but it's just a personal opinion. |
Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 11Well, you don't have to return reviews. I'll review if I think it's worth my sentence. If I don't, the content is probably simply plain. |
Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 4Yup, yup, when my laptop crashed, that's kind of what I want to do too. We're all impatient people - the power of technology. |
Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 2That is something I can really relate well. I personally like haikus - short and sweet. |
Bluebee 8/10/12 . chapter 20I love them! Some are funny and some are emotional. Real great work here. |
abhinav chugh 8/9/12 . chapter 20 I thoroughly enjoyed reading your haikus. Absolutely splendid :) |
LovelySocks 8/8/12 . chapter 11(Return Reviews) Ha, I love this one! You did a great job conveying the concept within the strict guidlines of a hakiu. If it were me, I'd add a "..." on the second line of the second stanza, but that's just a personal choice. This poem, though this probably wasn't what you were hoping for when you wrote it, literally made me laugh aloud. It flows nicely and I have no criticsms. (p.s. thanks for reviewing my story!) |
Guest 7/30/12 . chapter 3 I read your collection of haikus and I must say, they're all good but this is my favorite one ; D |