|Reviews for A collection of haikus|
| ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 21
How about "daily ignorance" or " daily rot"? Feel free to say no, I won't take offense, I assure you. 3
| ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 17
This one seems extra poetic; really pretty.
| ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 14
Lol, I get jealous of girls when I'm dating someone. This is what I feel. )
| ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 13
I really like this one. Shows sacrifice.
| ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 3
| ChaiBrad 8/11/12 . chapter 1
Definitely writer's block! Lol, I like it.
| Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 21
Disgust? That's the word that came into my mind.
| Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 15
I would prefer winking eyes, but it's just a personal opinion.
| Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 11
Well, you don't have to return reviews. I'll review if I think it's worth my sentence. If I don't, the content is probably simply plain.
| Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 4
Yup, yup, when my laptop crashed, that's kind of what I want to do too. We're all impatient people - the power of technology.
| Czeselle 8/11/12 . chapter 2
That is something I can really relate well.
I personally like haikus - short and sweet.
| Bluebee 8/10/12 . chapter 20
I love them! Some are funny and some are emotional. Real great work here.
| abhinav chugh 8/9/12 . chapter 20
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your haikus. Absolutely splendid :)
| LovelySocks 8/8/12 . chapter 11
(Return Reviews) Ha, I love this one! You did a great job conveying the concept within the strict guidlines of a hakiu. If it were me, I'd add a "..." on the second line of the second stanza, but that's just a personal choice. This poem, though this probably wasn't what you were hoping for when you wrote it, literally made me laugh aloud. It flows nicely and I have no criticsms.
(p.s. thanks for reviewing my story!)
| Guest 7/30/12 . chapter 3
I read your collection of haikus and I must say, they're all good but this is my favorite one